audience feedback after showcase 1

We received feedback from our class members on our film 'Chroniker', this was an incomplete version of our opening sequence and several parts of the film still needed to be edited and a backing track and credits still needed to be added.

We received some good comments saying that the cuts and editing of the film was good, and the idea of having lots of different shots of on the screen at once was effective and kept the viewer engaged. Other people said that the location and quick addressing of the main character was good and made the opening sequence more interesting, we also received comments saying that our film was unique.

Although we received a few negative comments saying that the storyline was confusing and that it the opening sequence was too long. We then had to try and change this by making the storyline more clear
 by re-arranging different shots and also adding sound may have made it easier to indicate moments of suspense or tension, as it was currently a lot less effective without sound.

Here are a few photos of the feedback we received from peers: